There was no poetry in anything you said. Just lines recycled from Hollywood scripts. (4/10 on delivery).
We tried to make poetry out of what was left behind of our souls (after the ones that came before were done with us), but not enough remained.
I have a poem for you now. About freckled skin and hands that quiver in the dark, about you and us and a place I'd never been before. But it is nothing to remember us by.
(It is a poem and we were not).
S.
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I like how you mentioned the ratings on delivering the lines. :P
ReplyDeleteNice read. :)
Interesting.... that was a well told story.
ReplyDeleteAlways intriguing... always leaves me pause for thought ;-)
ReplyDeleteYou are just so unyieldingly brilliant. You never cease to inspire me. 11/10 on delivery for you.
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This is beautiful, I've felt lonely like that too.
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