a naivety that we've since broken - in violent and gentle ways.
adam and eve traded paradise for a taste of fruit,
so we traded trust with the knowledge of what a grown heart looks like when it's wrung dry.
we traded wonder with books on the human condition.
and I traded you for a sense of freedom and a list of things I never even wanted to do.
so here's to us,
and to everything we lost when all the deals went through.
S.
{Photo: Alyssa Jiosa Flickr}
So profound S. ... I traded my trust for a fantasy and my D traded me before I even knew it was happening :-/
ReplyDeleteAren't we all a little, or too corrupted? What's worse for me is, I love how it feels.
ReplyDeleteTO ME IT MATTERS
That's some deep shit. It kinda grabs my attention like a pinched nerve might. But I kinda agree with Reckless Dreamer, I'm hooked on playing with that string of a raw nerve like playing with a tooth getting ready to fall out. I embrace my humanity a little too much sometimes.
ReplyDeleteWow really makes me think.You phrase everything so beautifully, making something so sad sound lovely. ♥
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure you've had your heart wrung out. At least a few times. Because people who haven't known pain just can't write like you do.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it true that we always want the things we can't have?
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