whose touch felt like heartbeats, deep and fierce –
strong enough to loosen their bony cage.
strong enough to loosen their bony cage.
whose voice was an open window in a thunderstorm –
surging through the heaviness of earth wind and fire.
surging through the heaviness of earth wind and fire.
whose body was the stones of Pompeii –
still standing, after everything.
still standing, after everything.
whose stare was a handgun in a purse –
unassuming and treacherous
all at once.
there was a boy whose skin felt like the last page of a novel –
inked with story. inked with finality.
(we get no sequel here).
S. unassuming and treacherous
all at once.
there was a boy whose skin felt like the last page of a novel –
inked with story. inked with finality.
(we get no sequel here).
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I want the sequel that doesn't exist... I have that story too... there was this boy... I loved him and I still do...
ReplyDeleteEverything you write is beautiful and emotional to me... really lovely <3
Thank you for your always lovely comments, Launna!
DeleteI think as writers it can be hard to accept when a story is done, especially when it feels unfinished. xx
Sometimes you don't need a sequel, regardless of how much our imagination craves one.
ReplyDelete"there was a boy whose skin felt like the last page of a novel –
ReplyDeleteinked with story. inked with finality.
(we get no sequel here). "
Damn it, your words echo in my head.
God. Every single thing you write is my favorite thing. You just get it and I don't understand how wonderful your words always are. This, though. Every single line. This.
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You're way too kind, always. But thank you. Your words mean so much to me. xx
DeleteThis is so beautiful I just keep coming back to it xxxx
ReplyDeleteWow, did you wrote this? It's brilliant how you visiualize 'that boy' and the description is very clear and strong. Nice work! :)
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I know that boy.. I still love him..
ReplyDeletethat last paragraph...is amazing!
Are you still here?
ReplyDeletethere was a girl
ReplyDeletewhose touch felt like heaven,
making me shiver all through my nerves
whose voice was so deepening
filling my mind like the music
whose body was sleek
rubbing her hand softer then silk
whose life was like a open book
with the blank pages
seems her love has washed its ink
over and over again....
This is absolutely beautiful. I think I mostly love how universal this piece is. When I read it I had several boys in mind and they shifted in and out as I read through stanzas. I think versatility is important in poetry, and it is working exceptionally in this piece. My favorite line is "whose body was the stones of Pompeii-//still standing, after everything." I'm in love with this, thank you, and well done.
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